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Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
[pre] Chapter Eight – Liaend and Beyond Garret cast a critical eye on Liaend and urged his horse a little further forwards. “Remember, in Liaend I am William, you are ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: Of Mice and Men
I really like this concept, even if the story itself has been short. It's amusing, well written, and somewhat insightful. :P
Aug 16, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
Chapter Seven – On the road again Wyes wasn’t sure how long he had been crying for, and he didn’t care. He could feel all the pain, all the heartbreak, ...
Aug 2, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
Chapter Six – Salus Wyes was staring warily at Garret, recognizing the strange ability that the four from his nightmares possessed. “What is this?” Wyes asked. “Magic. Or, magie if ...
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
The Wanderings Glossary Common translations Feeglu dy mayali, Sons of pigs Feeglio dy un mayaleh, Son of a pig Mawdyer les Deeu, Curse the Gods Hibrido feeglio dy un larva, ...
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Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
Chapter Five – Nightmares Garret took the bandages off Wyes’ left arm and checked the burns again. When he had found him lying unconscious on Alexa’s body, his left arm ...
May 16, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
Chapter Four – Tragedy is only the beginning Wyes loathed working on the farm. He hated cleaning up the animal’s dung for them. He detested ploughing the fields and sowing ...
Apr 20, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
The translations will be in a glossary at the back of the book. And those those rings are what you'd attach to your belt, yes, but I think the description ...
Apr 13, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings Part 1 (so far)
Just for all you folks that've been posting here... This is my old, OLD story. I wrote this when I was 13... I'm now 15, The Wanderings (v2) is my ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
Chapter Three – Of Sword and Man Wyes knocked on Garret’s door and was surprised when it swung open almost immediately. “Bah, I thought you would’ve been here ages ago!” ...
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
Chapter Two - Entanglements A lanky young man in his late teens, with brown shoulder length hair and brown eyes approached a small house, just outside of the wall of ...
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
Chapter Two - Entanglements A lanky young man in his late teens, with brown shoulder length hair and brown eyes approached a small house, just outside of the wall of ...
Mar 20, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
Yes time has passed, and to be honest I couldn't think of a good way to super impose text on the reader's imagination that says "Ten years later". If anyone ...
Mar 19, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
Chapter Two - Entanglements A lanky young man in his late teens, with brown shoulder length hair and brown eyes approached a small house, just outside of the wall of ...
Mar 18, 2007 -
Re: The Wanderings (v2!)
This has been updated. Chapter one is finished, enjoy! Criticism would be appreciated!
Mar 18, 2007
